Reading is something I have always enjoyed. I still remember the intense excitement I had as a child when library day was close. It was
such a thrill to be able to walk into a room filled with books written for a variety of ages. It was the only place I could sit undisturbed, reading a book intended for an older audience. The library was freedom from age confinement. It held no barriers and opened my mind up to all possibilities. As a child, I enjoyed this immensely. I spent a vast amount of time in this timeless room.
It was very early on in my life that I realized that reading gave me pleasure and writing gave me fulfillment. In fact, I still recall the very first story I had written in Grade 1. It was a heroic tale of a ghost trapped on a pirate ship unable to escape because he never learned how to swim when he was alive. The poor ghost finally escaped the confines of the ship by learning how to fly. However, somehow I doubt that Stephen King would consider me to be competition based on this tale.
One thing I have learned over the years about my reading style is that I am not one who wishes to be drowned in description. I really hate reading a story, novel, or book that has more pages written on the
color of walls, the tree that gave its life for the table, or relays the number of tiles on the floor. I realize that it is a writer's desire to express to the reader exactly what the writer envisions; however, I would really prefer to do without the long-winded explanations. I enjoy that a writer wants to be descriptive, but I do not want to read pages and pages of it. In fact, most of the time, I don't.
As a reader, I am more enthralled with plots, storylines, and characters than I am about what the sink looks like. Usually by the fifth page of any novel, I have mentally envisioned what the inanimate objects, houses, and communities look like. Most authors' descriptions of the furniture, rooms, and other areas are never duplicated in my mind as they see it. I am an interpreter: I prefer to stick to the characters and allow their personalities to reflect what I think their surroundings will be. It is the characters who create the surroundings through their personalities, rather than through paragraphs based on the theme by which the furnishings were fashioned. There are a few authors who are quite capable of
balancing the writing act between character and description and I have come to enjoy their writings. I do not find myself either skipping over pages and pages of description, or I find that they have balanced the two, leaving the reader interested in what it is that they see.
There is nothing more frustrating for a reader than to spend most of each page reading about where a table is placed next to a chair, possibly near a fireplace and all the colors, details and timelines of their existence. This much detail is just time-consuming for the writer and the reader. It is distracting from the characters, which to me, is the main reason to read a novel. Maybe I am just a people person who dislikes detail. I would prefer to read pages and pages of dialogue rather than pages and pages of what color a footstool was in its previous life.
You have to understand, I am not speaking of the setting. I am speaking of the long-winded settings whose pattern is found
throughout a whole novel. I love a good setting and I realize that settings must take place in order to date a storyline, but I would hope this can be achieved in just a few sentences. When I find that a writer is all about description, I am easily turned off and immediately believe that the writer had a block and ended up filling in space.
I realize that it is not easy (as a writer) to please everyone and nor should one attempt to, but I feel that as a reader, I know what I like to read. I mean, if you have Shane and Mary on a runaway horse, do you really care about what types of flowers, trees, birds, and grass they are passing before they might tumble to their deaths off the cliff ten feet away?
If Sherry and Doug are standing before the doctor awaiting news of something life-saving, do you really care about what brand name the stethoscope is or how many chairs are in the waiting room area?
See what I mean? What you really want to know is what is said and
what happens to the characters. I bet that with the above two briefscenarios, you had already created what you believed each scenario to look like in your mind based on your own creativity.
Let's try a test. You read each paragraph below and see which one suits your creative mind more. The story that produces the most vivid setting is the winner.
Story 1The wind blew hard against the window as if wanting to come crashing through the 18th-century wood frame. Liza looked over to watch the leaves flying helplessly outside. The hurricane was getting nearer -- she could feel the cold seeping in through the cracks. Looking around her bed, Liza gripped tightly to her rose-patterned quilt and her white cotton sheets, and she pulled them up close to her chin.
Her soft chamomile-scented pillow fluffed up tightly behind her neck
as it rested upon the headboard her grandfather made. The candlelight to the left of the headboard flickered with the wind. The table underneath it shook as the hurricane got closer and closer.
Liza brushed her brown hair out of her eyes, still clutching her flowered quilt close to her chin, trembling as the winds began howling as if a pack of wolves were howling their warning.
Story 2Liza realizes a hurricane is coming and is getting closer. Her heart pounds with fear. Her thoughts are scrambled and uncertain, as she has never experienced this type of terror before.
What does she do? Does she remain in her 18th- century wood home hoping it survives unscathed? Does she flee? Where will she go?
Liza trembles with uncertainty. Moments pass and the wind picks upspeed and strength. Liza makes a decision and runs.
I am betting that both scenarios created different pictures in your mind. I envisioned the first story as a bedroom. My mind focused
on the window and the furnishings in the room, but little on the character.
The second story concocted the face of Liza. I could envision her fear, the way her eyes looked, the way her lips trembled with such a decision.
But, of course, these are my interpretations and I am sure your scenarios weren't quite the same as mine. However, I am betting the results were quite similar.
And that, dear readers, is my point exactly. Novels that address the
reader with far too much description tend to bog down the reader as if they are in an overstocked antique store. I think some writers underestimate their readers' ability to understand time frames, timelines and historical periods. I also think some writers have too many pages to fill and not enough story to do it with.
In any case, the whole point to this article is that, regardless of how little or how much a writer may create description in their stories, I am going to interpret the story my own way anyway. I would just rather do it based upon the personalities of the characters rather than pages of description that could otherwise be put to better use.